Poem: Ask Me If Tonight is Fine (song)

(A song if you can hear it. Good luck with that.)

Ask Me If Tonight is Fine

(I made it thinking of Blackpink. Which would be beyond amazing. So I’ll leave my marks who would sing which stanza. Rose; Jisoo; Jennie; Lisa.)

R: People passing every day
mostly average and plain
my eyes are caught again
that one seems better than
a prince fallen in the field
he seems to lose no appeal
whether i close in or gain distance

Ji:When he stood before the crowd
repeating “Kim”‘s words as if he knows
the power in his voice
just wow

Je:nothing looked so sweet
or offered me those words
(R:im lost)
please let me hear it
ask me if tonight is fine
open up to my suggestions
become the sweet whispers
books speak of
(R:princes really do exist)

L:gossip have him questioning my availability
standards man he passes
he may have moved the bar higher
and still managed to jump it
sure i’m not thinking quite right
but he has me blushing from just looking
ask me if tonight is fine
i’m begging for the question

R:Every day i spot him
a new book hidden
seeking a peek leaves me with questions
wonder if he’ll return my greeting
ask me if tonight is fine
the answer’s on my lips

Ji:the man of my dreams
walked past my window
carrying half a dozen roses
for the lady with an illness
ask me if tonight is fine
i’m open to suggestions

Je:when i heard his voice
i stood shook
the tenor switches off
with a bass hook
that sets my heart to a new flutter
and the world turns a rose color

L:please i’m waiting
just a little question
we’re all thinking
ask me if tonight is fine
tonight needs to be open

R:Ask me if tonight is fine
Give me a chance
let me see a little more
princes do exist

Ji:Ask me if tonight is fine
The answer’s ready
let me see a little more
princes do exist
I’m ready

Je:Ask me if tonight is fine
(Ji:I’m open to suggestions)
(R:Ask me if tonight is fine)
(L: I’m begging for the question)
(R: Princes really do exist)
Je: Ask me
I swear it’s worth it


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I love Blackpink. I’m not expecting them to see the song and take it or anything. (Wouldn’t that be beyond amazing?!)

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